MY COLD TASK

In class, we did a 'cold task' to find out about what we already know. our cold task was on a narrative weighting. this is a snapshot of what I can do in 30 mins by myself.

We are learning to self-assess our writing so we know what we are good at and what we need to work on.

I want to improve my writing by using figurative language and 2A sentences👍🏾

 COLD TASK🥶

 TERM 2 2022 NARRATIVE 

Write a narrative, this could be a story you make up or a whanau story you retell. 

Name: Lenore

When I was a baby my dad thought it was a good idea to give me peanut butter; after that my ear swilled up and they had to take me to the hospital bc it turned out that babies are NOT supposed to eat peanut butter.🤦🏽‍♀

Once when I was 8 we had mini quods and my older sister took me for a ride on one but then it flipped and I got a massive boil on the back of my leg for like a month then my took me to the clinic to get it popped and heaps of pus came out . . .🤮